Audience
Can a viewer immediately tell who this is for and when they should care?
Offer clarity scorecard
Give each item 0, 1, or 2 points. A strong explainer usually starts with a clear audience, a specific pain, believable proof, and a next action that feels natural.
Can a viewer immediately tell who this is for and when they should care?
Is the pain specific enough that the viewer recognizes the situation?
Can the offer be explained in one plain sentence without jargon?
Do you have results, examples, screenshots, or a process that makes the claim believable?
Is the next step obvious: book, buy, start a trial, send a brief, or request a demo?
Can the same story support the website, sales follow-up, social clips, or a deck?